Thursday, 2 April 2009

Crit my work

We had a crit session for storyboards with Paul, and discussions were made about breaking the 180 degree rule, where the character walks off the right of the screen and enters left in the next scene. Then, again when he moves right, then appears walking over to the cement. Suggestions were made that the character should look as though he was heading over to the crowd at the cement, and would flow better. The character also originally fell into the cement from the same view as when he walks over, but was advised we needed to see him from the audience point of view, which i do think works better. After we later decided the order of stings, we decided to resolve my issues when making my idea.

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